Friday, June 26, 2009

Picture Perfect

I know, I know it's been a really long time and 6 months is just not acceptable... I accept - I'm guilty of this crime, but I hope I will be pardoned after this post has been read.
Disclaimer:
All the lines, words and situations described in the below text are purely fictional. They bear no resemblance to any person living or dead. It’s written only for the purpose of entertainment and is to be taken in that spirit. Enjoy!


She is lying on her bed, cuddled in his arms… She can hear the rain droplets falling on the roof… The sound can be so soothing… It’s really cold today… she moves closer to him, his warm breath falls on her cheek and makes her blush like a newlywed bride. She looks outside the window; she sees green trees among clouds and fog. It’s very misty outside but she can still see (maybe because she has seen the same scenery many times), far off in the horizon, she can see the sun rise slowly… piercing through the clouds, illuminating her entire world. She decides to wake him up, cranes her neck and looks up at him… He looks peaceful, calm, blissfully sleeping without a care for the world. She couldn’t wake him up, it was too hard for her… the sight she was watching was too wonderful for her to disturb. The sun rays pierce through the window, into her room… He’s awake now… He looks at her, her eyes are closed but he’s not sure if she’s awake or asleep… she’s laying in his arms… his angel... How he thought this was never possible. But it happened and it was true. She was his own now.She was here with him, for now and forever… he can’t resist it any longer… he moves closer, gives her a soft kiss on her lips and whispers “Good morning , I love you sweetie” in her ears. She smiles… Oh my god her smile!! Wasn’t it the smile that had started it all? She doesn’t even open her eyes and returns his whispers with hers – “I love you too”. It was not a phrase they used very often in their relationship… It was given; it was an unsaid premise… They used the phrase judiciously… Somehow neither felt the need to say it again and again… It was picture perfect. Neither was willing to move, neither wanting to say anything… the silence, the falling of raindrops, the chill of the winter… It was a dream, which had come true. Suddenly there was a loud thud… a banging noise Bang! Bang! Bang! She opened her eyes, it was not cold anymore, she rushed to the door – there was no one at the door, she turned back to look at him. He wasn’t there, she came closer, moved the blanket around, where had he gone? He was right here… She moved the pillows, removed the sheets, looked under the bed, as though he had hid himself from her… But no, he wasn’t there, maybe he never was, she couldn’t make it out. Was it a dream? How could a dream be so real? It couldn’t be a dream, his breath on her cheeks, the warmth, the happiness she felt, the joy, all of it was real, then how could it be a dream. Something had happened, but she couldn’t make it out. Reality called upon her, she looked at the watch, it was time to go to office. Hastily she spread the sheets back on her bed, set the pillows right and rushed into the bathroom. The only question that lingered in her head was - Was it really a dream? How could it be a dream? Where did he go? Will he come back again? Will she ever feel the way she felt when in his arms?

NOTE:

The idea of this post that I wanted to see if everyone could associate with the scene that I had set up. Could all of you relate to that kind of happiness? When you read it, were you transported to that location, did all of you imagine yourself in that bed? Let me know. Leave a comment.

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey Srinija,

You compensated with a nice post after a long break, so no complaints...Anyways, I just wished the dream turned real..!!

-
Khushi

Jyothi said...

Srini....
I really love your posts..... The way you express it....
But... there is always a touch of bitterness in each of your posts.....
I know you..... may be not completely but......
Just wish you all the best darling....
Jyothi.

Srinija said...

hi "Khushi" - you could have left your original name! thanks for dropping by and NO, it's not my dream... Just a figment of my imagination... This is precisely why i put in the disclaimer. Maybe I can become a writer... What say?

Srinija said...

hi Jyo... Thanks for dropping by!! Bitterness - maybe, but that's how life is ain't it? A bit of this and that... That's life...

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Unknown said...

hi srini,

the post was really good... great sense of imagination u have... i felt as if i'm reading a book... u can start writing one.. i'l be the first one to read that... all the best!!!

sudha.

Anonymous said...

My GOD....Srini...
...speeechless..yaaar..
Was out of this reality..wen readin ur post..
U made the time stop..:)
don wan2 write..much..will talk 2 u bout it..

hope i get tht time..

take care

Srinija said...

Hmmm... Thank you guys! and Keep visiting . A new addition has been made to the same post. Check it out.

Srinija said...

Anthe... Anonymous, neeku deniki time undadu... Live life a little. Work is not everything!

Unknown said...

hey srini...its really awesome....
the way u described is really wonderful...its pretty....too good....

n ofcourse its the truth that happens....what we think is real may be a dream that may or may not become real even if we wish too....

ohh ohh i am gng too senti....nopes...i just wanted to say....u have captured the two best emotions of life....in a simple n lovely story...

hats off to u srini....hope we keep getting more lovely posts frm u....keep gng....:-)

Srinija said...

Thank Sowji! I think this is the first time you have commented on my post. So thanks a lot, finally a post that reaches the entire group!!

Its really cool that you caught my point, life's a bit of this and that... You gotta learn to deal with both of them!!

Unknown said...

Srini...

You better start writing novels..

I was transported to the location which you had set up.But I didnt imagine myself there...

Expecting more articles from you..
All the best

vandana said...

Hey hiee srini,
I really appreciate the way u have explained cos the same can be told in a single line too but the essence of it u gave it truely magical touch lovely....

Srinija said...

Thanks Vandu!! Been a really long time since I heard from you. So what are you upto? Mail me :)

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Unknown said...

A dream doesn't become reality through magic; it takes sweat, determination and hard work. All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.

So, Dream is real, and reality is dream....!!! lovely post..!!!